Chasing River by M. C. Sakala
Have you ever read a book just because of social media? I have and never have been let down like this. This was the worst book I have ever read. I try not to say bad things about authors and their writing because I don't know their story, but this is genuinely terrible. In the author's note at the end of the book, Sakala wrote that she had written this book when she was thirteen. I don't want to be disrespectful or anything but whoever her teachers were, they failed her. The grammar was bad. Commas were in places I didn't know they could be. The sentence structure was atrocious. Sakala wrote in run-on sentences and broken-up dialogue. At certain points, I couldn't tell who was talking because the indents were in the wrong places. The book tried to have a deep look at grief when a family member, loved one, or friend dies, but it just felt shallow. I thought Chasing River was going to be a well-written, in-depth story about an African girl, Armani, going to live in ...